In terms of writing, I was writing what I realized I was writing a "Beautiful Woman Too Beautiful for Her Own Good" Story. It's a story I started a few months ago and want to finis. It's supposed to be a lightly humorous piece, but it's coming out sexist. I thought about switching the genders of all the characters, but that wouldn't fix the "women can't help being vixens / women can't not give in to carnal desires" vibe. I thought about making everyone gay--which seemed like a cop-out. So, I'm clumsily writing dialog and keeping an eye on the "Talking Heads" meter. Uh... 200 words and editing?
Work-out: 1.9Kcal on the bike. Plus a slightly new routine with free weights; one of the trainers suggested switching from The Machines to free weights on the theory that one-size doesn't fit all. I think she's right. Also, I'm focusing on contracting my scapula when I do stuff so my shoulders don't drift forward and strain the stratus (or whatever it's called) muscle connecting my neck to my shoulders.
On the local wildlife front: last Saturday, I watched a doe and her two fauns browse their way from the back neighbor's carport, around the corner of our yard, and walk between our and the west neighbor's houses. They were looking into our windows. I'd expect this sort of thing at my parents' much more rural house than our city house.
On the local wildlife front: last Saturday, I watched a doe and her two fauns browse their way from the back neighbor's carport, around the corner of our yard, and walk between our and the west neighbor's houses. They were looking into our windows. I'd expect this sort of thing at my parents' much more rural house than our city house.
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